From: Bart Hiddink <guesswho@wanadoo.demon.nl>
To: dance-paradise@yahoogroups.com
Sent: Sunday, September 21, 2008 12:02:20 PM
Subject: RE: [Dance Paradise] Can I have feedback on this trance song I made?
Hi Ryan,
The track is some what odd produced.
Also the telephone voice destroys the break completely.
The melody is to much and keeps running over and over.
It's 'in your face' so to speak and almost annoying at the end.
Not a track I would gladly listen for the second time.
Just my 2 ct.
Bart
Van: dance-paradise@ yahoogroups. com [mailto: dance-paradise@ yahoogroups. com ] Namens Ryan Franzak
Verzonden: zondag 21 september 2008 18:22
Aan: dance-paradise@ yahoogroups. com
Onderwerp: [Dance Paradise] Can I have feedback on this trance song I made?
Hi everybody, my name is Ryan and I am an electronic musician.
Recently I made my first trance song ever. I don't mean to spam here but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it.
You can find my song on
myspace.com/ vesl
Please let me know what you think. I want serious input like it's good or its boring, or its needs this or don't touch it. Can you guys just give it a listen real quick. I promise it is not a time waster, I worked really hard on it!
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