[Dance Paradise] Re: Can I have feedback on this trance song I made?

Ryan, I enjoyed listening to your song; the harmony appeals to me; the
composition is pretty subtle; the choice of synthesized sound is good.
Basically it's the way I would compose also.

Nevertheless, the bassline is too simple and a bit annoying. As I was
listening to the song, I could imagine a different, more creative one.

There are no strong melodies in your song. If I were to compose it, I
would add a guitar solo to it. I don't think it's a weakness in this
case, because it may be characteristic of the intended musical style.

--- In dance-paradise@yahoogroups.com, Ryan Franzak <neyowolf@...>
wrote:
>
> Hi everybody, my name is Ryan and I am an electronic musician.
> Recently I made my first trance song ever. I don't mean to spam here
but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it.
> You can find my song on
> myspace.com/vesl
> Please let me know what you think. I want serious input like it's good
or its boring, or its needs this or don't touch it. Can you guys just
give it a listen real quick. I promise it is not a time waster, I worked
really hard on it!

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