[Dance Paradise] Can I have feedback on this trance song I made?

Hi everybody, my name is Ryan and I am an electronic musician.
Recently I made my first trance song ever. I don't mean to spam here but I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it.
You can find my song on
myspace.com/vesl
Please let me know what you think. I want serious input like it's good or its boring, or its needs this or don't touch it. Can you guys just give it a listen real quick. I promise it is not a time waster, I worked really hard on it!

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